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Elven Angel
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0 posted 2005-07-14 02:41 AM


Your eyes seem to sparkle
like some distant star.
your words float away
on a faraway sea.
I drift on the waves
of your ocean so blue,
your smile bears me far
to your distant shore.

An ocean so deep
stretche between us.
one we can't cross
till we find our ship
that will carry us there.

That shore oh so far
i long to see soon.
take me there now,
oh please now you hear?
I wish I could breach
that ocean so blue
to see you at last
alone on your shore.

© Copyright 2005 Elven Angel - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-14 02:58 AM


Welcome to Pips!  Thanks for sharing this romantic debut.
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2 posted 2005-07-14 04:24 AM


Deep..and romantic..welcome to passions...

Goldenrose.

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Dark Angel
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3 posted 2005-07-14 05:01 AM


A lovely first post..Welcome to Pipland

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-07-14 08:37 AM



Welcome to Passions in Poetry.
I hope you find the comfort and inspiration here
that so many have come to know!

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-07-14 08:39 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Wonderful first post!
I shall be looking for more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-07-14 09:16 AM


marvelous...welcome, looking forward to more
Susan Caldwell
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Florida
7 posted 2005-07-14 10:12 AM


Welcome Ms. Angel!


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
8 posted 2005-07-14 11:56 AM


beautifully expressed loving heart to someone oceans apart

Hope

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2005-07-14 11:57 AM


beautiful!

welcome to Passions!

Ceinwyn
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VA
10 posted 2005-12-26 12:02 PM


My apologies that I missed this. I'm rarely ever around but I'm glad I found this!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

aujussy wolf
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11 posted 2005-12-26 12:18 PM


written with truth and passion
a very sweet poem
wolfy~

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