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Open Poetry #36

parking lot f palatial

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-11-07 07:52 AM

parking lots don't know any better
then to think they are palatial
when a lady walks them

in her cinderellas
and prince's are only jokers
with their hair combed back

and bigger credit cards
that promise a godmother's voyeur
that rents out "before midnights"

and blind driver limos
that there is a story line
somewhere before dawn has dreams

in this lost knight's premonition

___________

dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-07-2005 09:23 AM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-11-07 08:17 AM

that there is a story line
somewhere before dawn has dreams

in this lost knight's premonition

~*~

May there always be a story
lined along your pathway...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-11-07 08:32 AM

perfection, as always

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