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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA 
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I have 10 minutes left of what I need to do its been fun looking at poems that ease in my mind through and through Thanks for giving me theses good feelings they mean so much to me I just want to jump up and down I am so glad I am me Funny laughs funny rhymes They sure do make my time special especially when they are from you Poetry can get you very far -Laura [This message has been edited by Angelheart (10-29-2005 03:26 PM).] |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I think you blew it by the last few lines Dave |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
i liked this one though it doesnt have that same something that make all your other poems so special but it was still good thanks for sharing girl loveya  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this edited version is much better much better -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wishing......... Oh, but today is going to be good, I just know it -- so I'll forget the yesterdays when it hurt too much for me to be here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Angel-hearted One ~ May you always be joyful ~ and be who you are! You are like a breath of spring air! Love & Light, EA |
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