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Warbler
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since 2005-07-09

Posts 8

0 posted 2005-07-14 12:49 PM

I have seen beauty
framed in the gaze of a dying sun-
felt the warmth of a wind-swept smile
Oh the joy of sand slip serenade
foot song singing- two by two
Summer's eve on a beach with a view
and I only have eyes
for you...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-14 12:58 PM

How beautiful!
Welcome to Passions, Warbler. Your poetic song is truly lovely.

Elven Angel
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 10

2 posted 2005-07-14 02:25 AM

wow..short yet sweet

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-07-14 03:45 AM

As beautiful as the rising sun!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2005-07-14 04:22 AM

Enjoyed this..welcome to passions..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-07-14 05:03 AM

Sighing at this one....Welcome! I look forward to reading more from you.

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-07-14 08:35 AM

Oh, we're going to enjoy your poetry!
Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your E-mail for a special greeting!

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-07-14 08:37 AM

A most beautiful entrance post here!
Welcome and please enjoy your stay with us.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Warbler
New Member

since 2005-07-09

Posts 8

8 posted 2005-07-14 08:47 AM

Thank you all for the warm welcome. I must say, I'm finding it difficult to not be inspired while reading these pages.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-07-14 09:17 AM

made such a happy sound...

Welcome...and wanting more...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2005-07-14 10:10 AM

A very beautiful thing!

Welcome to Pip!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2005-07-14 12:11 PM

This is beautiful... what a great debut poem! *S* I'm looking forward to reading more... welcome to Passions! *S*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-07-14 01:11 PM

very nice

welcome!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2005-07-14 07:47 PM

Welcome!

Adoration sings in your talented write.
Be more.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2005-07-14 10:24 PM

Welcome to PIP, Warbler! This is lovely!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2005-07-15 03:42 AM

yes, it is hard not to be inspired

hope you enjoy it here

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

16 posted 2005-11-25 01:23 PM

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

17 posted 2005-11-25 01:48 PM

what a cool poem , sweet and short with real feeling ...your love is strong , as is your write ~welcome ~
~wolf

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

18 posted 2005-11-25 03:39 PM

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

19 posted 2005-11-25 03:44 PM

How beautiful!! Welcome to Passions, Warbler!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

20 posted 2005-11-26 09:00 AM

This says so much so deceptively simply with those exquisitely sensitive images. I also loved the spherical format of your poem. Whether you intended it or not, it is undeniably there - visually taking you in a circular embrace of your loved one; ending where you started - expressing your love.

I will certainly be looking out for your work.

Incidentally, I live in a suburb called Yellowwood Park and all the roads (except one)are named after birds, and one of them is Warbler Way.

- Owl

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

21 posted 2005-11-26 09:05 PM

Welcome to Passions! It's pretty obvious we needed a Warbler.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

22 posted 2005-11-26 09:36 PM

How sweet! Welcome to passions!

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