Open Poetry #36 |
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Telepathy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Soft sage redeems a listless view Clarity and warmth smooth the walls Settling in the mind a certain venture And the cease of a futile focus I have not found a cold stone Only texture, and reflection The aura of something strong and hard My sculpture has changed in my own eyes If a rock, would I be granite? Then grant me sandals If I cannot tumble smooth the edges Such heights leave passages to skip Soft sage…the echo that was born into me So vigorously criticized that pliable part Transformed from quiet depths to water falls Still, I have a will that is relentless Made certainly a mute observer To accept the grace of solitary waves Blown in fragrant knowledge through my fields Green, and ever merciful the rendering of this Bring me voice of mercury My eyes fall upon chaos in two whispers Making mine, a canvas perpetual to reinvent Soft sage, for wisdom hopes to grow Copyright Kkh 11/02/05 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my, TD...you inspire me!! "Bring me voice of mercury My eyes fall upon chaos in two whispers Making mine, a canvas perpetual to reinvent Soft sage, for wisdom hopes to grow" I wish I had written this! ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write TD. Very much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Soft sage…the echo that was born into me So vigorously criticized that pliable part Transformed from quiet depths to water falls Still, I have a will that is relentless ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh, if I were to breathe out loud a beautiful heart felt sigh, it would be this~ As always, a wonder of words you are to read, to feel, and to ponder, dear Lady~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...wind and earth and fire and water... An engaging elemental write of beauty, grace, and wisdom. ![]() May the cleansing power of sage be with you always. ![]() EA |
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