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Kazeru
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0 posted 2005-11-02 12:20 PM


Sayonara
Sweet goodbye
Bitter tears quench my eyes
Try to smile
Say no more
Always remember the one you adore
Yes, it stings
Within my eyes
Fighting back those tears I cried
So I smile
When I say that little lie
Sayonara,
My sweet goodbye

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-11-02 02:29 PM

a bittersweet goodbye, within a nicely written gentle poem
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2 posted 2005-11-04 12:40 PM

I feel this one... every word... yes... *S*
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