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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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It is because It is blue That the bowl becomes A focus for the pause If the rim were better formed Its very symmetry Would lead astray the eye Being Imperfect as it is It draws the heart Into the soul of blue To see someone You never knew— Or had forgotten Was ever there |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
May I keep this one John? Thankyou.  Excellent read. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Of course Chris Thank you for reading. John |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i just loveeeeeeee your poetry!!! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks Helen . . . It's good to know John |
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