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in a heartbeat |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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my breath freezes, a warm meets cool reaction canada sends its love from the north, arctic gifts at least the stars seem clear and comfortable their close nit galaxy's of sparkling life in the silence of this november night the body of your dreams i am thinking of the chances we met the soft caress of your words are held close she lulls the wolf of white and grey, the shadow play into a new world of warm fires and welcoming desire reading under low lights , i found the beginning a hidden doorway to your heart flowers and a note that would express a smile on your lips a sweet rose and a sensual kiss that's what i would do for you ...all in a heartbeat JDWIII 11-2-05 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: oh, do you have any idea just how beautiful a thought that really is??? thank you, for such a beautifully written thoughtful piece |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sighs* beautiful  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wolf "she lulls the wolf of white and grey, the shadow play into a new world of warm fires and welcoming desire reading under low lights , i found the beginning a hidden doorway to your heart" Now that is good romantic poetry! This poem hints at what I have been thinking about lately---how human beings must tie the physical with the spiritual, speak of it in their language... fancy cars and boats will never take the place of the "wolf, white and grey" whose image as a totem cannot be remotely aped by fancy cars or diamond rings. Mother earth loves poetry like this, and so do I... -----------ice ><> |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wow Wolfie....this is magic...lifts right off the page....wow ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the entire poem leaves me breathless, but this, this was the ultimate... she lulls the wolf of white and grey, the shadow play into a new world of warm fires and welcoming desire reading under low lights , i found the beginning a hidden doorway to your heart like coming home, isn't it? smiles and hugs, for a marvelous write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This piece is pure magic!! I absolutely love it! Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
this poem was straight out of my deepest emotions ....it is very real and just how i feel ...it was hard to capture it into words , but when i do it makes it all well worth the soul searching that leads up to the poem itself....this is one of my falling into a love type of thing kinda poem lol..... as i imagine what it would be like to be by her side ... maybe wishes do come true only time will tell .. lol Thank You for the Great replies , so happy you all read this one peace and jazz ~ ~wolfman |
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