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Funny Feelin'
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since 2005-12-14
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0 posted 2005-12-14 02:08 AM


About the Civil War..sort of...

What a grand picture you paint
of the sacred earth you taint
a massive power struggle
born of a tiny trouble
in a southern land, under a bright blue sky

This is your masterpiece I guess
historic tragedy to the rest
choked by dust, drowned by flood
reminded of the cause through blood
in the end, only one flag will fly


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-12-14 02:15 AM


I've got a funny feelin' that you are going to like it here ~ and we are going to like having you!

A very fine debut poem! Sadly, there is so much truth to your words.

Welcome aboard!

Warm hug,
Earth Angel

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2005-12-14 07:32 AM


Well done!! I look forward to more..and a very big welcome to Pip!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-12-14 07:34 AM


welcome to PIP

well done, an intense read...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-12-14 09:09 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your first post.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your words.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...  

bgj
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since 2005-11-09
Posts 128
Ga. USA
5 posted 2005-12-14 01:13 PM


Great write. It says a lot with a few words. Enjoyed it, lots of luck,
bgj

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2005-12-14 01:53 PM


welcome to pip, nice work looking forawrd to more
Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-12-14 01:58 PM


Welcome to Passions !!
Enjoyed your first post
Have fun here
hugs, Chris

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