Open Poetry #36 |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada ![]() |
glasses and violets placed precariously on my counter balancing each other with their presense precise, i wanted to be precise. 11:30, i was washing carrots in the kitchen the sun was shining through the window making designs on my shirt. the light felt like life and i just wanted to stand there till the sun set and feel the warmth move down my body making me painfully aware of the body parts that lacked those comforting rays. i felt the hairs on my arms rise and fall with the placement of the sun on my chest and in that moment i knew what it was to breathe feeling this warmth move through me and around me through the clouds and the glass of the window it still reaches me precise, i wanted to be precise. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chelsea~ 'the light felt like life and i just wanted to stand there till the sun set' I adore this thought~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Fascinating. What a wonderful treatment of the simple. I like this. RMW |
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