There Are Dangers In Loving Someone Too Much

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-10-26 11:03 AM

There Are Dangers In Loving Someone Too Much

I wish you didn’t inspire me
there are no words left to talk about
just breath made without sound

there are
too many games in this life
and in words
and I find myself so silenced
in squares of the black and white
and I had been moved
and you played me

where does heart break
and healing begin
move me there
once again in your turn

you have all the answers
but truly the questions out weigh
why
when you are so quiltfree

you played bait and switch
you knew just what you were doing
and I got so tangled up in strings
of being your puppet on call
how blind you were
not seeing my heart was attached

why
can you love somebody
too much
just how many times was it, that you asked me if I loved you?

if you only knew
it was just all something
you didn’t understand
I had given my heart to you
now it is just torn in two
I keep one side for myself
and the one given to you
is silent on the empty half shell
sitting next to sorrow

there are so many
one sided conversations
and those with you
and they are all the same

I think back
and I think the cruelest thing
you ever said to me was
“you love me, you just don’t know it yet.”

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2005-10-26 11:08 AM

Helen,
I pray all is well. What an excellent though sorrowful write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-10-26 11:10 AM

I keep one side for myself
and the one given to you
is silent on the empty half shell
sitting next to sorrow

I definitely understand that~~

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-10-26 12:30 PM

"if you only knew
it was just all something
you didn’t understand
I had given my heart to you
now it is just torn in two
I keep one side for myself
and the one given to you
is silent on the empty half shell
sitting next to sorrow"

Helen, that is one hell of a great stanza.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-10-26 07:43 PM

Felt some of these feelings myself...hugs...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-10-26 08:13 PM

"where does heart break
and healing begin
move me there
once again in your turn"

Yes, there are many dangers in loviong someone too much..
Excellent write Helen.
Heart hugs.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2005-10-27 02:17 AM

Ohh wonderfully expressed feelings , I relate so much to this

Hope

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2005-10-27 01:48 PM

Hmmm ... cutting ... deep

      .... gutting and filled of weep

                such heart does hold one thing true ...

             when immersed in faith,

                           LOVE becomes you ...

           CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

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