Open Poetry #36 |
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Nightmare |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA ![]() |
I had a nightmare It was about another scenery of life I was not even with my boyfriend Casey It was my birthday I ran away from my house went to a shady spot Started crying my eyes out near the shady spot A girl came up to me saying everything will be alright I woke up tears dropping from my eyes I turned on my light I looked in the mirror my nose was as red as my cheeks This was around 4 o'clock in the morning I got me a drink of diet coke I woke my mom up I told her I had a nightmare she told me to go back to bed I started to go back to sleep I had another bad dream I dreamed that a bunch of cats bit me hurt me At 6:15a.m. I woke up again had to get ready for school this has been blanking my mind all day wondering why I'd dream something like this Poetry can get you very far |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
That is a true definition of a nightmare. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this has me worried about you but the poem was good -may the force be with you in poetry |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
im sorry to hear baby ![]() |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Silent it came all evil and black, No way this dream from heaven sent. It stole my sleep not giving it back, Till at the dawn it went. Angelheart, I believe this is the first of you I have responded to. I shall look for more from you in the future.... INclan |
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