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In the Hidden Things
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In the Hidden Things |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Don't say my name. Let me answer only to your breath as it whispers past my ear. Don't touch...not yet. Allow the space that falls between us to gather to your hands. Find me here. Without a name...in the sweep of empty hands. Find me in the hidden things. I am here...waiting to be found. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Enjoyed the read. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a whisper of sigh....beautiful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Awesome Ericc !!!hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very fine indeed. You inspire. SG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~soft sigh~ thank you Eric. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric, you write from a dimension that most do not see ~ but we feel it.  You have carved yourself a unique niche on these pages of cerulean blue. Love & Light, Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Eric - Your writing never fails to touch and that's a sign of a good poet. Bravo! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Allow the space that falls between us to gather to your hands. Find me here. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your muse is priceless... you have that rare gift of being able to poetically define the whispers, sighs and quiet spaces...and you do it with such ethereal depth while maintaining your signature style of succinctity. I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~ you've captured my attention again within soft hidden spaces |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You have a touch with words Eric that is amazing Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Subtle energy of love flowing between our distant worlds, where we breathe molecules containing the secret of life. Songs written in letters of light by the rhythm of our heartbeats. Sounds and vibrations of the night reach us from afar and without pronouncing our names we know, for they resound within everything endlessly ... I found you, dear Eric, Poet of my heart. Your beauty sings in your words. I love you. Margherita  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have to agree, Eric... Another  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
JM quoted my favorite lines... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc....this is beautiful! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
There's a name I don't say....but for altogether different reasons. Still, this poem moves me. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eric Your words are always such a pleasure to read. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I like this very much... find me here... yes! *S* |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very much enjoyed, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great writing Jason |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this gave me goose bumps! always such a pleasure to read you...  |
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