To Weave a Spell of Seduction....

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

0 posted 2005-10-23 12:48 PM

I thread my loom
with all I know of you
  your thoughts
  your dreams
  your insecurities
Each thread spun taut
as piano wire
tensed and still..
waiting.

I lay the weaving threads
before me.
Measured action
for reaction...
Stimuli
to spark a resonse.
I pick the first one up
with ever-gentle fingers,
fingers that have waited
far too long to tremble,
...as if nervous.

And carefully, so full of care
the task begins.
A glance ~
A blush ~
A smile and fleeting touch ~
Each thread, as if a spider's
beckons to you...
catches you...
and draws you near.

I'm weaving a spell of seduction,
As my fingers draw each thread
  through crimson chords
I think of you...
And whisper prayers of passion
to a faithful Deity.
But instinct dictates pattern.
Experience, the style.

You'll never even recognize
     the multicoloured cloth I weave,
          but when my scissors snip the final thread...

then you are mine.

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-10-23 12:56 PM

This is good, I like the way you explained yourself and what you feel here, thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2005-10-23 01:17 PM

Nancy - this is just terrific - wow how you weave words and images to capture me - loved this - Paul

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-10-23 01:34 PM

Enchantress~

'carefully, so full of care
the task begins.
A glance ~
A blush ~
A smile and fleeting touch ~
Each thread, as if a spider's
beckons to you...
catches you...
and draws you near.'

This is about as purtemous as anything I'll read this day~

*sighs* of poetic contentment~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-10-23 02:52 PM

Well you .. you...Enchantress you!!

Love this!!
Hugs & Miss Ya!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-10-23 03:03 PM

WHOOHOO, a nicely spun web!
~silken thread of passsionate intent~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-10-23 03:09 PM

NancyLee.....that is some dandy weaving!

.....jo

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

7 posted 2005-10-23 06:39 PM

Whew!Enchantresss...I feel like having a smoke after reading this one. :-)

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2005-10-23 06:45 PM

Now you might be at your best combination of talent, spirit and thoughts of your own with this charming piece. Hugs KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2005-10-23 08:38 PM

Loved it, all of it, but especially this
part:

But instinct dictates pattern.
Experience, the style.

You'll never even recognize
the multicoloured cloth I weave,
but when my scissors snip the final thread...

then you are mine.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

10 posted 2005-10-23 09:46 PM

Nancy

I think you may be magic!

MGROVES

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california

11 posted 2005-10-23 10:39 PM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2005-10-24 08:41 AM

Tinker you weave a beautiful spell on me. This is wonderful write.

believe in what your heart feels...

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2005-10-24 09:57 AM

Words weaved to perfection in this fantastic write. Oh, yes, nicely done!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

14 posted 2005-10-24 12:31 PM

Nancy, you wove an enchanting spell of seduction!

You truly are and Enchantress!

Warm, autumnal hugs,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2005-10-24 05:10 PM

Thank you all so very much for your generous replies!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Waterfall27
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since 2005-06-24

Posts 98
Ontario , Canada

16 posted 2005-10-24 07:28 PM

wonderful write

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2005-10-24 07:29 PM

And at this time of year,
you have woven this very, very well!

Such an Enchantress, you are!

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

18 posted 2005-10-25 02:54 PM

Once more...with feeling.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

19 posted 2005-10-25 06:33 PM

Ah, thank you all once again!

Scorpio~ You devil you!

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