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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-10-22 02:58 PM



The one
In all her glory
While just nearby already
Another
Poor withered crone

So side by side
There are two stories
To test the pen
And fill the hours
As stolid time
Brings on its change

On whom
Or which
You spend the night
While others sleep
In soft neglect
I leave to you
My distant friend

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Constance
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 393
Ohio
1 posted 2005-10-22 03:39 PM


Thanks for showing me this wonderful picture.
You paint well.

Smiles,
Constance

AutumnAire
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since 2005-10-21
Posts 6

2 posted 2005-10-22 08:36 PM


Beautiful pictures in your words.
Suguar Maples are my favorite trees, and Autumn my favorite time of years. Sugar maples at this time of year are beautiful...just like the pictures in your words.  Thanks.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-10-22 09:16 PM




Dear John

As many have reminded you
of your own words, thoughts,
feelings, so did you remind me
of a photo
that I used with my own
words, thoughts,
feelings...and I do hope
you enjoy

the fall.

I do so enjoy
your escapes into
reality.

Thank you.

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-23 12:30 PM


still beautiful.
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