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Open Poetry #36

you tell me

passionatepoet
Junior Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 10

0 posted 2005-07-12 11:22 PM

YOU TELL ME
BY CARINA
You tell me that you're gonna leave her,
but why should i trust you.
You tell me that you love me,
you tell her that too.
You tell me that I'm beautiful,
you tell her that she's gorgeous.
You you tell me she means nothing,
you tell her she means everything.
You tell me that we're lovers,
You tell her we're just friends.
Now I'm telling you that,
I was a fool for falling in love with you.
I'm telling you that you have a girlfriend,
I'm not about to make it two.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-13 12:07 PM

I like that you worked your way through this and came to the only logical conclusion, even though feelings don't often follow a logical path. Good for you!

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-21 08:25 PM

I would be so mad if a guy did this to be but ya that is the last conclusion there.. the only thing i would do is just dump'em .. aint fair tho ..thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

3 posted 2005-09-21 08:29 PM

Smart move on your part. I can't stand a person who tries to get away with dating 2 people at the same time. Awesome poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-09-23 11:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

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