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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-21 06:34 AM


A window corner
The leaves of a tree—

Crimson dancing
In the wind
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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-10-21 07:59 AM

You caught the scene very nicely!

Love,
Margherita
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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-10-21 09:29 AM

I can see it! Excellent.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-23 12:57 PM

what was dancing was not the leaves but your heart.
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