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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-10-17 11:10 AM

When love dies,
the blinking raindrops
eclipse their puddles
and drift unchartered
along the winds
that find them;

when love dies,
the rain forgives.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2005-10-17 11:52 AM

when love dies..let's do our best to move on

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-10-17 12:10 PM

inkedgoddess,
Love like the rain comes and goes.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2005-10-17 06:12 PM

..sigh

this is lovely.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2005-10-17 08:37 PM

you have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself...  I enjoy reading your poetry, inkedgoddess.
        Take care,
        miscellanea

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-10-17 09:11 PM

Lovely yet slightly sad piece Michele..
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2005-10-17 09:19 PM

Such a delicate touch to this Michele...
A touching and wise write.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-10-17 09:48 PM

if only we, as humans, listened to the seasons while they speak . . .

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-10-17 10:27 PM

This poem is so uniquely yours, dear goddess of love and nature.

May love rain down upon you,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-10-19 12:54 PM

Nice...James

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-10-19 03:25 AM

Very nice indeed.

And, well, the rain is a new beginning too, yes?

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

11 posted 2005-10-19 06:44 AM

nice,,,,very nice

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