Open Poetry #36 |
Mirror ... Mirror |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Reflections of the yesterdays reside inside tomorrows of me~ Mirror Mirror please be kind for there is so much more to see~ Far beyond the lines of frown that often turn me upside down Please reflect the willing smile that plays the corners of these contented lips gifting me with youthful grace for just a little while~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is beautiful. Still, it sounds a little sad/ I hope you aren't unhappy. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, I think your wish has already been granted. Lovely write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQsie~ Happy as a little piglet in a mud pudlet~ Love you~ *Huglets* Aw, Larry ... that's sooooooo sweet~ thankee~ ~*Me ~*No matter what I search for ... let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))>< Email - [email protected] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, beautiful this.. beautiful you!! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I can't picture you frowning!! Loved this poem. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah Marge, the mirror shall forever be kind to you. Lovely write. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
I like to think of mirrors in so many ways and the way you described it was cool, thanks for giving your point of view shall I say Poetry can get you very far |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Marge you will always sparkle and shine and your mirror no doubt will always be kind.:-) |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh Madame Marge...I don't even know where to begin! That was so touching! Lovely write! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....Can I please borrow your mirror? |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Marge I will 'reflect' on this poem of yours! Eh! Eh! I enjoyed this verse! Love Isobel xo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ain't that the truth lovely lady, how happiness and peace makes the entire body healthy, youthful regardless of the outside, inside we're so pleased and content. I loved this! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful Marge. Frown ?? Not you! You are only as old as you feel they say. I know you are 39 .. no older. Love ya, Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriends~ This face knows a frown or two but, one thing is for sure the smiles far outnumber the frowns but instead of upside down I simply try to turn them downside up~ Just a 'birth-of-day' thought that came to that reflection in the mirror~ Betts~ 39 ? ... your sense of humor is only exceeded by the *hug* of your friendship~ Thank you ALL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge honey, now that we're going to be grandparents in May, we pray for this also. A wonderful write that touched my heart. hugs and loves, Marti Living simply and calmly in the mountains! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
And I already thought you had "youthful grace" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this, Marge...in fact, I think it would make a good morning ritual for me to recite it! ....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marge, absolutely gorgeous! A 'must-have' to add to an already large collection! Thanks for submitting this. A treasure... |
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