Open Poetry #36 |
distant closeness |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you keep me at such a distance but my mind has longer arms and hands with fingers that would know the depths of you even beyond those places you have touched before I look at your eyes often and wonder of your mouth when it says please and when you bite your lip and say yes like that and I wonder how you look when you are at the window waiting for the ocean to touch the glass with a whisper so you can write love words in the memory of a vapor __________ Dark |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ Morning *sighs* of realize that you are word-near ... though vapor-far~ Your words breathe beauteous thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
she answers: memory of vapor in the heart of perceptible ripples monotonous sweeps of horizons depth gently half-submerged on a hill to hill threshold long passages & perfect solitude simmering wickedness that intimate kind…which widens ships anchored into ministering spirits in the stranger of eagerness looking surprised earnest consideration brings contentment to mind i am that mysterious shade in your nights passing you a rope ladder of mystery half crazed with your eyes… like summer lightening across the sky lean over the rail, quietly remark smother my witchcraft possessed in a tropical sea fetching us some reflection of depth somber…immense, soothing undertones stepping right inside… you bloodthirsty ruffian you’ve had the prize…. the last spell of ocean’s porthole whispers in your ear, with a quiet smile make me hold on a little while longer~ take off my frigid dignity… play for me, music of the night... beyond those places in my eyes... now see what you've inspired |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge, thanks little lady.. ________ ms leej hmmmmmmmmmmmmm dayyyyymmmmmmmm I likes it you are a lovely river thanks |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thus dubbed my new favorite from you D... made me smile ya did. LOVED this'n hon. live for today, |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is very nice, thanks fofr sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Most definitely one of my favourites by you Mr D... you write beautiful. Thanks for sharing. m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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