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Pondering Thoughts...
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Pondering Thoughts... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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How small and silent the place between two navels... how short the stretch between the river and the ocean how reticent the voice on the first word spoken after prickly sweet obscenities have surfaced, & made the mark in the throat. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You've certainly put a lot to think about in the comparison of two navels and the gap that arises with the wrong words spoken. That is one lovely smile in your new pix. Wow. Hugs Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi sister of mine! My goodness you have been pondering haven't you?! Awesome write. Love the new pic as well. Hugs & Miss Ya !!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gosh Nancy...you made me think with this one...very interesting!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words touch me.... M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very interesting thoughts here. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thought provoking, wonderful write, my friend. j. |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
Awesome write |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
yes this was a good write, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Enchanting!:-) And I like your new pic also. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
cool way of expressing the age old struggle between attraction and rejection... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Nancy, your writing is as beautiful as that smile of yours, what a great picture of a georgeous poet. Wow! Thanks for both...hugs you. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A beautiful, warm, poem to read, Just before I go out the door and face the cold mud... Thank you for the nice sendoff.... ----------ice ><> |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful message in this write Tinker. Words can unite or pull us apart. And your new picture is beautiful. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
powerful hon. Huggin you tight, and missing you more... live for today, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thank you all for your kind replies. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wow Nancy - amazing poem here - loved it - Paul |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
That will keep me contemplating for a while, ya' know. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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