nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2005-10-13
08:57 AM
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Word Chances
There are times when the inspiration wraps itself around me and the excitement of words tries to bond with the thoughts that rise so easily (especially in the morning)... holding in soft smiles waiting, just waiting to spill over onto the moments of you.
Then the spaces occur, the lapses in tempo and tomorrow's beyond stills itself into a loser's lottery, where nothing has been gained except the scratching off of that very moment when words wish to chance their meaning, being woven into a cloak to gift and cover you for the day.
It is raining again and I am wearing the clouds, those filled to the brim with fantasy droplets and me not maiden enough, to be humored by your masked presence.
It's the threatening from words that breaks me in two, that brings the unsaid into a random chapter whose write is too long and whose interpretation is lost to the absurd.
I have a picture of you in my heart surrounded by life's blood, wanting you to feel what I know. The longing may seam day to day but you cannot measure its warmth when those memories silence the desires.
When with a velvet touch... Yes, this is for you.
M
*inspired by Sue's "I Always Knew"
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss)
[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-13-2005 09:28 AM).]
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-10-13
09:02 AM
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Maureen, I have goosebumples all over the place! That was a brilliant piece of writing and I am tucking this into my trove of poetic treasures.
Absolutely puuuurfect!
Linda
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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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2005-10-13
09:04 AM
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Maybe it's like scrabble, where y'can't see the tree for the forest?
(This is a triple word score m'lovie!)
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