Open Poetry #36 |
lar' and the boatman |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
chasse' on dow'n layree the boat man gots no time for you to count your mo-menz get on your good skin suit no need for dem ol heavy boxes or missy sue with her soggy eye shoes you did the gumbo at mollie's, lar' you laughed at the pretty girls and at the war boys you know'd b'fore back when we did the jungle school and heard the babies that never cryed that died before their mommies had bellies it is a good time now, for tokin' lar' we will take the gray train high and get you off at ol' peter's saint got no time lar' for sashay patty and forgivin tea _____________ dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
love your way with words D. Good morning, so nice to see you again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I don't know what your stokin, but sure sings a great voice of intoxication... and while the good guys rush in for the save I'm kickin and screaming, polizzze don't take me away...let me be by this story tellers side, for just a moment, a moment in time...cuz in my book, he's the one with the white hat...a jack of all trades and a voice like God's path. Wonderful write there bro! Enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
how you know dis? *smile* I owe you sum Boudin, b'bay. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you for the read..am blessed with your touches, GS, Lee J and Saxy Serene.. thannnnnnnx for the verve.. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
dark, I will not pretend that I have a clue as to what you are talking about. I only know that it flows, and, at points strikes a chord. No time, Boatman, make ready, dress for the occasion, go down in style. Doc |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh hayl yeah~ versatile...your voice, so unique~ Paz~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
interesting My spirit will rise |
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