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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-13 07:58 AM



chasse' on dow'n layree
the boat man gots no time
for you to count your mo-menz

get on your good skin suit
no need for dem ol heavy boxes
or missy sue with her soggy eye shoes

you did the gumbo at mollie's, lar'
you laughed at the pretty girls
and at the war boys you know'd b'fore

back when we did the jungle school
and heard the babies that never cryed
that died before their mommies had bellies

it is a good time now, for tokin' lar'
we will take the gray train high
and get you off at ol' peter's saint

got no time lar' for sashay patty and forgivin tea


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dark

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-10-13 08:02 AM


love your way with words D.
Good morning, so nice to see you again.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-10-13 08:42 AM


I don't know what your stokin, but sure sings a great voice of intoxication...
and while the good guys rush in for the save
I'm kickin and screaming, polizzze don't take me away...let me be by this story tellers side, for just a moment, a moment in time...cuz in my book, he's the one with the white hat...a jack of all trades and a voice like God's path.

Wonderful write there bro!  Enjoyed.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2005-10-13 08:46 AM


how you know dis?

*smile*

I owe you sum Boudin, b'bay.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2005-10-13 09:36 AM


Thank you for the read..am blessed with your touches, GS, Lee J and Saxy Serene..

thannnnnnnx for the verve..


Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
5 posted 2005-10-14 09:53 PM


dark,
I will not pretend that I have a clue as to what you are talking about. I only know that it flows, and, at points strikes a chord. No time, Boatman, make ready, dress for the occasion, go down in style.
Doc

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
6 posted 2005-10-15 08:48 PM


oh hayl yeah~

versatile...your voice, so unique~

Paz~
~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

MGROVES
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Posts 3802
california
7 posted 2005-10-16 08:45 PM


interesting

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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