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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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We . . . We We met We married We had children We almost had silver We grew apart We divorced We met . . . . . . . . . . bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes, hard times create some of the finest jewels... well done...and enjoyed |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thanks LeeJ was tring to write a 20 or under, tried to get it at 20 but would have had to put the word We at the end also. thank for reading bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I think it's perfect Bernie...no matter how many words it contains. Well done & enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Bernie..as my sister said.."Perfect!" Well done! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A diamond of a write on love coming full circle. It would be delightful if you could treat us with your poems more often!   Linda |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is real good, I could feel this in this, and things happen and I see for a reason, it all all shows here. Thanks for this. Poetry can get you very far |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely presented thoughts, Bernie! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good job, Bernie! ....jo |
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