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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Los Angeles How might we sing through our trials, and hurts so much so that questing angels would smile, even as they might beg to understand the knowing of this moment of living when all they can do is guide us…to a light… Tell me how we might breathe in life’s blood just to spit out the gravel of our falls, our losses… so much so, that those very angels might laugh at our hysterical joy in the because of because, Oh, for they may appreciate some brilliantine, some most vivid sense of colors, sounds, and warmth… but what do angels know from living in joy of trial? Oh, to live a time such that an angel would laugh… at the sound of my fall into life. ~*~ For a friend, that she may find herself... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I just watched "City of Angels"...and served myself a hankie...IF only angels felt our pains...perhaps they do? Beautifully written dear lady. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea, you write with such ease of expression. Excellent. Big hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Kari...this is just magic..absolutely beautiful. one for the library  m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Me, too....I mean, this reminded me of the movie. I think they must delight in all our endeavors. But who knows about the trials....I think we become "like angels" when we rejoice in them, though. Much enjoyed this one. ....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I have found an angel many times, in you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...just..OH MY!  ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Just watched city of angles two nights ago, and they do smile...oh how I love that movie, as well as this beautiful poem...well done senorita.... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
ABCDEFGHIJKLMN O PQRSTUVWXY Z | | ZYXWVUTSRQPONM L KJIHGFEDCB A The Emerald City does exist...in any way it could be defined.....The I-5 should be paved with yellow bricks. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful. I like the way you did it, too. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
its hard to find your way around that city that I often thought was misnamed then again, you have to keep your eyes on something other than the freeways a tender write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...I needed to read this again and give it a bump and you a |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sighing...lovely, just lovely. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omg...... I was just having thoughts along this line earlier today and now I find this as I was searching for your name in the few minutes I had here.. omg MommaK..... when I find the words.. I;ll let ya know.... and you know me, it is not often that I am speechless....   mummmmmlive for today, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well ok, so now you already know and I don't have to say it... but really? I just came back so soon cuz I forgot to click the button...  |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
wow, this is powerful, and if angels could feel pain, then they can quickly relate to the human life here  Poetry can get you very far |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Your beautiful poem is quite a gift to us all. Your friend must be quite an inspiration. You are so eloquent in thought and word. miscellanea |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..when in piptalk.com, always to reach for a Sunshine poem for calming..yess.. spiros --- |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Once again evidence of friendship that provides value multiplied beyond the words of expression. Done only as you can. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sunshine I sure like to takeing a glimpse through your eyes. Beautiful as always. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karilea I can see that your golden pen hasn't lost any of its shine. It's nice to read you again and I hope all is well in your life. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i hope this helps your friend find herself again , just having you as a friend should be a light to her darkness when all they can do is guide us…to a light… your true sunshine : ) peace ~ wolfy ~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could try to quote a favorite part... but I'd end up repeating your poem in its entirety... so instead of trying to convey what I like best of this, I'll just say... it's drawn me back again and again. *S* Beautiful work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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