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Open Poetry #36

I see you

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-07-11 09:00 PM

I see you and how my heart cries
you speak of her and I just want
to die.

You care for someone else overseas
you never really cared for me,I am
just a stick you had to burn a mere
seed to sew out into the world

Oh how my heart yerns and cries out
in complete and utter agony and despair
why don't you care why or why don't
you care

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passionatepoet
Junior Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 10

1 posted 2005-07-11 11:24 PM

i really like this poem. i went through something similar with my ex and i'm glad someone knows how it feels

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-07-12 02:47 AM

So sad , whsts worse , they never seem to give reasons why

Hope

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2005-08-09 03:16 AM

yea he did but reasons men give for being an ass is just empty bullshit correct? lol

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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