Feeling Too Much of Too Little

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-11 09:32 AM

Feeling Too Much of Too Little

I can remember those light touches.
The neck whispers that made me smile
waiting for lips to rest their moisture warmth.

Inadequate words,
emptiness slipping through mine
afraid of the loss of meaning behind them.

I feel misplaced, priceless moments
lost to time and distance,
an inconsequential being.

I am falling backwards,
the challenges sometimes
disconnecting me from you.

I want to cry today, having held back for weeks.
I want to scream from a depth that has been hiding.
I want to leave behind the fears and feel the calm
of arms to hold me still.

Today, I just want to feel~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-11-2005 10:30 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-11 10:14 AM

cry, my poetess, then go forward...don't base your happiness on someone else, you've got so much going for you, your a damn good poetess....with style, beauty and greatness....

Hugs...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-11 10:16 AM

Amen to what Lee said.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2005-10-11 12:56 PM

incredible...just incredible !!!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2005-10-11 03:49 PM

.... feel you have ....

   for I, and these others, have been touched ....

        gracefully, deeply, completely

   CT

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-10-11 06:55 PM

Maureen...I echo LeeJ too. But, you know..it's ok to write it out...feelings are a reason for poetic expression.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2005-10-11 08:31 PM

beautifully sad, Lady.

enjoyed

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2005-10-11 09:15 PM

Ifeel the same way, my friend. This is beautifully written.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

8 posted 2005-10-14 12:02 PM

Yes, there are times I feel this way as well. That is why writing will soothe your tender hurts.

A universal write indeed. Thank you.

SG

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-10-14 12:27 PM

There are times when we just have to let it all out Maureen.
This hurts..cause I know what it's like
to just want to 'feel'.
Heart hugs.

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2005-10-14 01:29 PM

Heck I have those days too when I feel this way and don't even have the words to explain the why of it. On those are the days people stay clear as I bellow it out until it leaves

Try it, at least you get to be alone for a while and it beats punching your pillow Maureen

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