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Arts......&.......Fire
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Arts......&.......Fire |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Arts.....&.....Fire As the vocalist strives to grow then round the bridge from raw and raunchy, fooling around before they try, then sing that sound in search of a soul and you know it when your spine tingles then they are the ones who can play an octave as if it were a ladder hung over their heads on a school ground again, and somersault the air ~*~ As he, or she, touches their own musical instrument, their connection to sound, it is from ear, and bone, inside out and almost, upside down and you know it when your spine shivers then you hear one’s birth in earth, as time is resonant to heat of the heart, and blood bubbles in syncopated stimulation and a tap of foot returns to earth ~*~ Then…there is the one who picks up a quill, hesitantly, then, with a vigor, a need, who hears the song of tempo beating the earth’s drum and you know it when your spine moves this, is the art of the poet, who aligns the song to an instrument then sometimes, with no coronet nor guitar, let alone a trill of key, be it brass, or ivory, need be. ~*~ This art of fine tuning a song, or a note, or a line, once wrote, is never wasted upon those, who consume the fire. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-17-2005 09:22 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and you know it when your spine tingles" Yes..yes exactly!!! Smiling at you lovely lady. Hugs~N ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...So true!....I know it when my spine tingles, like now!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful as always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sis....I just read this one to Abby over the telephone.....she loved it and thought it was amazing! So do I. ....jo |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is oh so true, and -- speaking of tingle -- beautifully said. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I-i-i aa--allways ss-stutter when mmy spine tingles. Your thought come out so cleanly and on such diverse areas. Well said and written. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your awareness and ability to look through others is uncanny...you don't mean to, but the deepness of your glances are extraordinary and most unselfish...you absorb with a curiousity and hunger for life, not to mention, savor every moment, as if it were the last.... Incredible.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Oh yeah! The artist comes in many forms and the musician can dance with the poet. I loved this! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Hello, Sunshine, I've read this at least four different times, as it is special to me with my raunchy voice! I've been working on a song, and I must say it is as pretty as the one you heard--at least I think so... It is slow to write its melody, but it's coming. Sure wish I could sing. Exquisite poetry! miscee [This message has been edited by miscellanea (07-16-2005 06:06 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
YES!! YES!! I know just what you mean....Magnificent...*big hugs* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh WOW...  a  Mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That...madame...is poetry and all forms of art in thier quintessence. Beautiful write. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This one got my toes tappin', Kari Great beat, that enhances the theme, boogie-woogie, like kinda-sorta The ending is perfect... "This art of fine tuning a song, or a note, or a line, once wrote, is never wasted upon those, who consume the fire." enjoyed ------------ice/ford ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: EXACTLY! talk about hitting the essence of it! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, so glad you all enjoyed this. Although it has met with a bit of alteration, after two wonderful readers said, "ahm, perhaps..." and I this'd and that'd it, as their suggestions...were very welcome! Thank you! |
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