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SoundWaves
Member

since 2005-06-22

Posts 113
Center Stage

0 posted 2005-10-09 11:24 AM

the sun is lower
in the southern sky
raking leaves of summers past
cool winds blow
I turn my collar up

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2005-10-09 11:29 AM

the sun is lower
in the southern sky—
raking leaves of summers past
cool winds blow—
I turn up my collar

nice

John

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-10-09 12:24 PM

Hi, SW!

You certainly captured the moment with an economy of words!

It's good to see you back on the blue!

Warm, autumnal hugs,
EA

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2005-10-09 12:47 PM

Wonderfully written Chris. It's a crisp clear autumn here. I may rake a few leaves myself today. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-10-09 02:17 PM

Christopher~
I could feel the spill of Autumn in your penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-10-09 07:14 PM

and.....you look pretty handsome when you turn that collar up!

Nice write Chris.
hugs & Miss Ya!!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-10-09 10:50 PM

Hi Chris!
Very good imagery in this piece.
So much can be said in a few word..
Well done!
~Hugs & Luv ya~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2005-10-10 05:08 AM

Beautiful reflections....

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Waterfall27
Member

since 2005-06-24

Posts 98
Ontario , Canada

8 posted 2005-10-10 02:10 PM

Beautiful

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2005-10-10 02:29 PM

clouds shadowed
tumbling thoughts
shoulders touched by
yesterday's living

M

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