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The game. |
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Poetryatheart Junior Member
since 2005-10-05
Posts 16Jax, FL |
Came home from work feeling a little depressed with the tiring days and no fun and games I went to the sports game it sure was fun With that wonderful person I was with I really enjoyed a laugh We both were in the right paths While we talked I was surprised I felt opened minded as I looked at his twilight eyes I forgot all about my first love when I was with him I felt a newness in me that could turn out to be a maybe I held him I hugged him Making things feel nice Of the beautiful friendship that feels so much like shining light I didnt not want to let go I felt a deepness inside of me Just to laugh out loud shout Yip-ee! The night ended so fast I was free from him Which was not enough time to me That it just passed Justin a snap hope, love, is the value of poetry |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It is quite amazing when it happens You just click with someone and it is right Hope it works out Bodger |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this was beautiful thanks for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is a beautiful and heartfelting write, expressed alot of emotion in this, and I do thankyou for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Good-luck,hope all will work out for you. loved the poem too. :-) |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is so sweet. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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