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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-11 07:31 AM

her eyes played music then
at the side of old being born
at the white washed mission
where demons wore long sleeves

she stood tall for me
measuring the parts of me
she needed to lean on
with her long times lonely

I told her of the city there
beyond the sea side towns
where her athena would be free
to carry a whisper box yes

and wear the ink of a man
on her bare shoulders
when she walked the dunes
and asked forgivness of her god

for the velvet of a carnal blessing
_______________
dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-11 08:32 AM

and the wind blows in words of more

Morning D

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-07-11 08:34 AM

to carry a whisper box yes

~*~

and a prayer book of hymn....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-07-11 12:24 PM

"she stood tall for me
measuring the parts of me
she needed to lean on
with her long times lonely

I told her of the city there
beyond the sea side towns
where her athena would be free"

loved this

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-07-11 12:50 PM

DS

"a whisper box yes"...love that!! Your poetry is a gift that keeps on giving.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-07-11 05:38 PM

A blessing indeed....and a whisper box "yes" is all that's ever needed.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-07-11 06:12 PM

What a gift, it is to be able to read you...
always, stunning.

Mxx

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2005-07-11 06:33 PM

Excellent..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2005-07-12 07:23 AM

most humble thanks ladies and gent..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-07-12 10:56 AM

Ooooooh - this is wonderful - love the feel of it slipping through the mind -

S

passionatepoet
Junior Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 10

10 posted 2005-07-12 11:44 PM

i love you're poem.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2005-07-13 07:17 AM

you can really make one feel alive again, shame another stomps it back down to nothing as always.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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