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TWENTY OR LESS...#208
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TWENTY OR LESS...#208 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#208 Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon eyes part butterflies rocket the G-force of desire whirls the image of a face You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely swirling... achieved by longing... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes... This one I could feel. Hugs~Nancy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Depending on who and which face. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice yes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kariliea, yes... among other things... Nancy, that's what it's all about... Seymour: Indeed -- but I wasn't thinking nausea...  Dixie: Thank you... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, caught me holding my breath in this whirlwind  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Mark, You do have a way with words that is totally your own. Loved it... I hope u got my email. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kacy... and you are quite the catch, my dear.  Thank you, My Melody... I did indeed and shall respond shortly. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Minimalist of words, but with the grace of wind and the passion of the night, the reader feels.. Enjoyed! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"the G-force of desire"  .....loved that! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ravishes the eyes, and G-Force....well simply...that one I enjoyed... more? love the way you play with words, and the readers emotions....soft touches, swirl emotive locomotion....kwel! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just smiling at the simplicity of your words~~ M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just smiling at the simplicity of your words~~ M Of course now it will double my response..guess that means I need to write you a 20 or less... hmmm...let me think a bit... ok here goes: Eyes see the direction of right Its power holding Its source the force of desire and You *s( didn't want to waste the response nor ask to have it deleted so the above...a gift of words for you Mark.) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Aleta: I appreciate your enjoyment and response -- thank you. Jo: That's a "heavy" sensation, isn't it? Thanks for the feedback. LeeJ: Thank you most kindly for your encouragement. There will be many more around the corner, as soon as I can grab a moment to prepare them... Hi Vandana . Your smile makes for a beautiful sunrise this morning...Maureen... your inspiration and appreciation fuels my incentive to keep carving... Thank you for your always thoughtful remarks, and I equally enjoyed your reflection. More shortly... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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