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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Was it you, oh word, of words, lost in mother’s arms? Who exiles your tresses, to keep us safe and warm? You think in reason, not for normal wear What you feel, shall fit a broken day of care? Your eyes grow dark, while time disappoints you Love always lives on…despite the hour of whispers That leave you sad, alone, in shadows forgiveness Pain still builds a deed of fortress… I so wish, you needed me for the change of All those unfamiliar chimes of failures…of The air that draped across your flesh You thought were unfamiliar You never assumed our still born tardiness But bore in us children… Oh Lord, please don’t throw, good words away No matter how wrinkly or lean The thing is, despite a never ending stream There is still a blush of dreams to dream You never cease to grow, please don’t close the door Time is sorely precious like the beds we make I realize the surge of something I can’t control But it won’t stop me from reaching out to touch A voice quietly musical, wearing smiles, forms & blush [This message has been edited by LeeJ (10-04-2005 08:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A little different for you but Lovely Still. Good morning sweet |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Lee!! Tucking this one away for another read at a quieter, less busy time. ~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lee ~ "There is still a blush of dreams to dream" ~ One of several memorable lines! May all your blushing dreams come true! Have a glorious day!  Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You could have written this for me. "Oh Lord, please don’t throw, good words away" Amen!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You should be proud of many, many of your poetic writes, and especially this one. It is superb and very touching. I've read several times Take care Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Oh Lord, please don’t throw, good words away No matter how wrinkly or lean The thing is, despite a never ending stream There is still a blush of dreams to dream" Library clicked. LeeJ, understanding this and thanking you for penning it. Great write! .....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Lee... you just touched thousands upon more.... |
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