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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-10-04 12:11 PM



I Awoke

In the morning I awoke
and knew not why,
I would want to
live without her,
I would rather die.
Still, I was
in her arms
from the moment
we fell into bed,
and I loved each one
of her tender morsels
and every sensual
word that she said.

JamesLee
October03
2005

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2005-10-04 12:16 PM


So very sweet, JamesLee!  
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-10-04 12:31 PM


oh... your such a sweety

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
3 posted 2005-10-04 01:20 PM


this is beautiful thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-10-04 05:50 PM


yes, a sweet one, JamesM


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Jeep Monkey
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Chaos
5 posted 2005-12-18 06:58 PM


...her tender morsels

That is so beautiful.  I'm going to tell my husband these lovely words.  Hope he can memorize them and say them to me at just the right time.

...moist and meaty

You know - the dog food commercial.  Sure hope he doesn't get mixed up.

pictureme2
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6 posted 2005-12-19 01:04 AM


sensually written. I felt the warmth!
picturme2

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