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bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2005-09-28 05:33 PM

I Do 2

Upon the pages of history
wishing everything
in pencil
for the ink remains
allowing for no corrections
wrongs or rights
till the death of hearts
still remembering
words once said
for the first time
i do
too
.
.
.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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Bernie Slicker

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-09-28 05:43 PM

I think there is an ache here between the lines....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-09-28 06:56 PM

Briliant words

Bodger

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-09-28 06:59 PM

That's the problem with commitments....oh, well. That's the problem with love really. Good write, Bernie.

.....jo

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2005-09-29 03:28 PM

Thanks for reading greeneyes, no ache here just something I wrote. And decided to post it. I really don't have many orginal posts, heck for what almost 5 years I don't have a lot of posts. But I do read a lot here, and I am learning.

Thank You
Bodger and iliana for reading

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

5 posted 2005-09-29 03:57 PM

very nice write thanks for posting it

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2005-09-29 04:39 PM

Hi Bernie. "wave"
This is a very good thought-provoking poem.
It would be nice if we could just totally
erase our mistakes, wouldn't it? It seems to me,
sometimes, that I would have a lot to erase!!
Hugs,
Ethel

Jeep Monkey
Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 96
Chaos

7 posted 2005-12-18 06:48 PM

Poignant.

It is all in ink, isn't it? Even when we use the eraser anyhow - rubbing until there is a whole in the paper - the ink is still on our heart. Ink. That's quite an interesting view. Quite accurate.

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

8 posted 2005-12-19 01:11 AM

bslicker
I enjoyed the flow of this one, both
the pencil and the ink! I'd also
encourage you to post more! Interesting
and relateable read!
Thanks for sharing this.
pictureme2

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