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Hold The Tears
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Hold The Tears |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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 skies fill of greying clouds ready to spill upon such crowds the innocent set to release a noticed moment unable to cease eyes well retaining fears stories to tell beyond their years small increments of life we've known unnoticed moments alive .... alone cries still we hold the tears it is God's will 'til someone hears and feels the pains we have to share tasting the rains thirsting for air * * * A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a sad poem thank you for sharing this piece -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
speaking with such emotion.. thanks for sharing this. Poetry can get you very far |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Craig, this is good.....liked the graphics, too.  ....jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Enjoyed! love the rhythm and rhyme not to mention the message. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is God's will 'til someone hears and feels the pains we have to share tasting the rains thirsting for air * * * looks like a crystal tear to me...too much Renaissance this weekend  M |
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