Open Poetry #36 |
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Memories |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Her skin was brown and gently laid upon my emotions Touching lightly deeply knowingly inquisiat Her skin was white and fluffly laid upon my feelings Snuggling widely deeply knowingly knowing Her hair was upon my shoulder and demanding upon my feelings Touching songs deep within knowing passion Her essence was within me and a long road was finally conquered Touching desire narrowly targeted knowing relief Her night was long within a feeling that in her smile and laughter Touching a passion without feeling In passion in feelings memories are long and feelings do not leave nor memories |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautifully written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"In passion in feelings memories are long and feelings do not leave nor memories" Oh, so true. Lovely write, Bodger. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is so beautiful Bodger thanks for sharing, and heres a question, why the name bodger ![]() -may the force be with you in poetry [This message has been edited by Sharksbean (10-05-2005 01:22 PM).] |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
memories nice one dave My spirit will rise |
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