Open Poetry #36 |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Tantalizing isn't it Amazing Soul searching show Hear see read my writing Listen as I say This writing here for you Can you hear? Its important Break through the death Get focused, believe Imagine the world stopped Head implosion And its real You can feel it Don't stop, don't think Slower the feet Higher the fall Running from the bullet Quick steps pause And here is the living death Get off Its gone Laughing The brightest sun Remember and never forget Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
praise god, the creator, not one wanting world control, the beast, computer is quite a beast isnt is. My spirit will rise |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
very good poem thanks for sharing ![]() |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very well written, thanks for sharing Poetry can get you very far |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you guys. I was hanging out with my friend at IHOP, and in the midst of our discussion the word "off" came to mind. So I grabbed a paper table mat, flipped it over, and wrote "off." Glad you like it. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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