Love Poem for Her Easy Ears

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Open Poetry #36

Love Poem for Her Easy Ears

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

0 posted 2005-12-19 05:41 PM

Love Poem for Her Easy Ears

My eyes shuttered at your radiant smile.
That’s why I loved you.
That’s “Loved”, I said.

I loved you for a while.
That is true.
But I wasn’t right in the head.

You said you loved my graceful vocabulary.
You melted for my rhymes.
My poesy brought you to joyful tears.

But now I am solitary,
And that is fine.
Because I found out that you have easy ears!

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2005-12-19 05:49 PM

caress with one hand and slap with the other?

nicely done.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

2 posted 2005-12-19 05:51 PM

good writing.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2005-12-19 06:19 PM

enjoyed the write Ed....I'll try to find some of my old ones

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2005-12-20 10:00 AM

Sad, but clever!

- Owl

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2005-12-20 05:22 PM

Easy ears, eh? I get it.

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