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Open Poetry #36

You cared

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-30 04:57 PM

It was a sudden night everything about us no words
Some would seek spirits to arise from a sandy beach
And then to complain when one arises in your gut
But you are male and mail and your protection wasn't on
And in your gut is an image that you didn't protect against

A sandy cove wasn't your desire it was just sand sea and vision with escape
And you cared

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-09-30 04:59 PM

I enjoyed this one. There's no protection against caring, and that's a good thing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-09-30 05:13 PM

Thanks Pilgrim

Words were to change things on their head and then ask

Did you

Bodger

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-10-01 12:07 PM

hey D

good to read ya

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2005-10-01 12:09 PM

lol at that did you Q

but what a cool write!

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