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Open Poetry #36

five minute abstract

darkling
Member

since 2001-08-28

Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2005-09-30 01:56 AM

heartbeat
softly pounding
counting off
seconds
I've known you
always known you
for a week
your voice
here
when you are here
when I am gone
in dreams
of us of you
blankets
and your
heartbeat
softly pounding

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-09-30 03:08 AM

Much enjoyed...this glimpse of passion.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-09-30 07:11 AM

The tune that makes you feel One.

Lovely write.

Love,
Margherita

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

3 posted 2005-09-30 09:52 AM

Certainly know this. Well done.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-11-24 12:11 PM

This cannonade of a poem has only three responses????

I don't think so.

Up it goes!

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2005-11-24 04:19 AM

O yes the music of the heart. It's been so long since i've heard it. thanks for reminding me and a beautiful poem indeed

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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