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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-09-28 09:20 PM


On the other side
Of the scream—

Late at night
Not pay for view

A young girl
Left all alone

An abandoned house
The wooden floor
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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-28 09:52 PM

wow, sounds very interesting. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2005-09-29 09:13 PM

I like how your poems really make me think alot. I really enjoy reading them.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-25 05:26 PM

felt it.
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