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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The moon shines on cobblestones Mute rock gardens and slate gray roofs Through a window from a radio The sound of strings being strummed Crickets chirp Throughout the night From a distance the lone bird’s song Orion crossing the eastern sky She walks in silence Under stars |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! Even at the sound of modern radios ... the stars can create the atmosphere and make you feel the presence of antique spirits ... Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How absolutely lovely. Your poem made me feel the peace of the night. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Water on stone moon on water Shimmering with the winds touch Ghetto beats die behind motors And the silence hasn’t a chance Rats scurry no need to hurry The cats too small to challenge them The great bear stomps the sky She cries in silence All alone Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Orion crossing the eastern sky She walks in silence Under stars lovely sight |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. |
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