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Question of Lust
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Question of Lust |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . . . . love has left me here in this barren world of want which way do I turn away from my lust for you or back to basic instinct . . . . . Chris Barker Septemeber 2005 ~~~~~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chris, There's a difference? Hmmm Fun question. Is there a follow up poem that answers it?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Larry ... lol....beats me. I'm the one asking the question!  Maybe you might have a "follow up" poem? Hmmmm? Thanks for reading and commenting. hugs!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
here I am in a world I don’t recognize standing at a fork in the road I have never seen after weighing my choices I have chosen the warmer path If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww Larry. How nice! The "warmer path" being? Hmmmm?  Thankyou for this. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nice. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
very good poem thankyou for sharing this with us -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
follow your heart chris... thoughts to ponder.... ~~**~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Good question. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Chris.. Leave it to you to come up with a question like this. Hugs & Love, Teed~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chris, the picture was perfect with your words!  .....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The excellence of the question wrought a poem in return... a double dip in delight. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so much! Hugs all round. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thank you Sunshine and this deserves another bump Chris. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amazing question, dear Chris! In the desire, there is life! Combine both. No need to flee ... Beautiful ... Larry's words too. Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow...thanks Larry! Margherita - thankyou for reading and commenting. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind |
Rich diction. And when accompanied by such an image. Strength and power in words. By the by....I like basic instincts. |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
Strong image perfectly matched with the strong words of indecision. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wonderfully heart-provoking... K |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Tough question ... if the world of want is barren, then turning to basic instinct is like ... the bird in hand, I would think interesting thoughts |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Rex !! Good to see your name in Pip again. Thanks for reading and commenting. hugs! |
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