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Hyperbole
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Hyperbole |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Hyperbole Hyperbole now lives with me Has dipped its oar and steeped my tea Has entered well upon the stage Full of passion full of rage I’ve launched upon a sea of goals Making waves a sea of souls I’ve cut the tethers of my bind And taken off within my mind I fly the air of fantasy Switched agony for ecstasy Plucked the flower of deserve By sheer mordacity and nerve It is a temporary thing I would my pride one song to sing One gallant leap of soothing rhyme To stay for me the all of time Is this too much for my believe To wipe my nose upon this sleeve |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such powerful poetic lines, dear Seymour! Hyperbolic! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehe, you do fly Senior Sy... Hey, what say, you seep my tea and we'll sit around and talk about poetry...I like splenda and caffine free? Yes? Hugs you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you for the love and hugs and read. LeeJ That would be fine for you often dance upon my spine. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, but you have done it again dear Seymour. I sit here shaking my head wondering how you manage such awesome writing day after day. May I please join you and Lee for a sip of that decaf tea? hugs to you, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You wou be the guest of honor. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is great writing here thanks for sharing man -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I fly the air of fantasy Switched agony for ecstasy Plucked the flower of deserve By sheer mordacity and nerve" ~ And well ye should! Thou be most deserving of such extravagance! Have a glorious day! EA   |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nicely written, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I thought at your age you carried hankies! That sir Sy is fun write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
lol.....that last couplet....hehehe. I can deal with this kind of wiping a nose on a sleeve anytime! Much enjoyed.  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharksbean Any time my friend Earth Angel Love you and your replies. Angelheart Thank you for the read. Larry C Well it was fun for me. Thank you iliana So glad you enjoyed and thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy....look at all you've done.... No wonder we admire you so! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hehe, so that was YOU who I saw fly by waving the flag of hyperbole Sy, masterful Pips poet of sublime rhyme all the time! BRAVO! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Midnitesun That was me. LOL |
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