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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-27 10:23 PM






Beginners love is a starter
of what you feel
it comes from your heart
it feels so real

It is something you think about
for someone in a special way
it can make a difference in your life
day by day
when you care someone very much
you feel that you cant stop
you laugh, smile, shead happy tears
that is what beginners love makes you feel


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
1 posted 2005-09-27 10:27 PM


thats so sweet thanks for writing lala
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-09-27 10:39 PM


Sweet write, Angelheart!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2005-09-28 06:32 AM


Oh yes, it's just so!

Tender write, enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
4 posted 2005-09-28 09:20 AM


Very beautiful Angelheart, We never forget our first love. Back in the day's of old we called it "puppy love". But love is love. You always make me smile!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-09-28 09:22 AM


Yup, it certainly does, what a lovely way to share it...

Enjoyed

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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Florida
6 posted 2005-09-28 12:31 PM


This is so sweet. I really enjoyed the poem. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
7 posted 2005-09-28 03:36 PM


~Sharksbean~  Thanks for your delightful response,




~iliana~  Thanks for saying that and you are sweet yourself, and thanks for responding.



~Margherita~  thanks for your response godbless you!





~StevenS~  Thanks for your wonderful response, and no we dont forget about our first love, something that only would happened once. so true there



~LeeJ~  Thanks for your response, and it is a lovely wear to share it, just as you said it



~sweetpoetess~ I am glad you enjoyed to poem, godbless ya!


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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