Open Poetry #36 |
My Famous Mistake |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Trust I should of hand in you but what else could I do. people hurt me on a daily basics I killed anything we had when I lied and went away "oh why did I change so suddenly why couldent I just let it be, why couldent I just let things riddeeee but this pain this hurt inside impales me so much it makes my very soul die You were the one that never lied you also were the one the that made me cry,two wrongs dident make a right but all I did was engult myself in anger and put up a fight. "Ohhh why did I change so suddenly why don't i just cut my wrist and black out my heart and run to you in my dreams where they ought to be" You were hurting to I just wanted to help you but ohh why did I have to press on why coulden't I just let it be why did I have to care so much just to feel your touch. Take all your pain and instill it on me I want to be your cross that you bare Sing to me the sweet lullby of the forgotten as my heart grows hallow with this numb pain |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this was very heartbreaking |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Foxy One ~ This line aches especially "Take all your pain and instill it on me I want to be your cross that you bare" ~ Be careful what you ask for! You just might get it! EA |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thanks guys Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
you said some things that i have felt before. good write. -shane |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thanks Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
sad but good. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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