Sharksbean
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2005-09-27
05:24 PM
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everyone loves to eat donuts this is a fact but what would happen if donuts attacked they'd dunk us in coffee and glaze us over then they'd feed us to their pet bagel rover or they might stuff us with creamy filling and then theyd eat us those evil vilians so be careful what you eat for if youre not careful youre food will eat you and thats saying a mouthful
-may the force be with you in poetry
[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (09-29-2005 03:40 PM).]
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-09-27
05:34 PM
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Sharksbean Cute, enjoyed.
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yv
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2005-09-27
05:55 PM
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HaHa!! Delightful write!! I never thought of it that way...thanks for the warning!! And Welcome to Passions!!!Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine Still shrouded in blinding Darkness
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Sharksbean
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2005-09-27
06:02 PM
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thank you and you may want to avoid the crispy creams they'll bite your arm off-may the force be with you in poetry
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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
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2005-09-27
06:02 PM
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LOL thats a good one. and yes I happen to think that way sometimes, with the whole "food thing" but o well.. thanks for sharing, Mr. Donut man! LOLPoetry can get you very far -Laura
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Earth Angel
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2005-09-27
06:10 PM
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Oh, no! Say it isn't so! I'm going to be afraid to even eat a potato with all those eyes staring back at me!
Here's a donut for you. This one is safe to eat because I baked it myself and it's angel food!
Loves 'n laughs, EA
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Sharksbean
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2005-09-27
06:22 PM
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thanks EarthAngel I hope we'll see some funny poetry come from you lots a lafs Sharksbean-may the force be with you in poetry
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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
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2005-09-28
12:35 PM
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Man, how did you know my weakness is for donuts. LOL This made me laugh. Keep up the good poetry!!!Poetry is beauty in words.
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StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
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2005-09-28
01:07 PM
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Sharksbean I LOL at that one. Great!
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Greeneyes
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since 2000-09-09
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2005-09-28
05:36 PM
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a much needed and yummy smile ...~~**~~ There are moments when speech is but a mouth pressed lightly and humbly against the angel's hands ~~**~~
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LeeJ
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2005-09-29
12:53 PM
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I HATE DONUTS, yeah right, my first job was working in a bakery...hehehe mmmm, mmmmm, those freshly baked glaced donuts still warm....
enjoyed!
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