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satyr's gavotte |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the metal of rain again brusing the falling fruit from some cloud's billow tree with it's reflecting drumspeak the day wallows her snake through the gray mud of morning serpentine is lovely as a woman or a highway that loves strangers with only temporary pretention then folds them as slippery leaves under here entwining paths to the mulchery of digested memories I crave the curves of 1 again and how her bosom volumpts to hills more than the hands of sky can surround and more than enough for any man's kingdom even in the oceans of his greedy dreams ___________ dark scribnote: canyons before jalama beach.. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-27-2005 09:05 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Highway One... continues to mesmerize... I do enjoy these jaunts, Sir... thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you certainly paint a wondrous picture.... Morning D.S. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I crave the curves of 1 again and how her bosom volumpts to hills more than the hands of sky can surround and more than enough for any man's kingdom Another wowser *smiling again* m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for the gift of your reviews |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
nice ride |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I absolutely LOVE your title. It captured me, and I had to read the poem that went with it. I envy your talent with titles. And 'volumpt' --- what a great word to coin, what a wonderful image it creates. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
the day wallows her snake through the gray mud of morning Does it get any more descriptive than this??? Awesome job, Sir. When all is said |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....Agreeing with Ringo on those lines. Makes me want to take a ride to SF!!  |
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