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Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

0 posted 2005-09-26 10:20 AM

From the moment i saw her i was in love
she looked like an angel sent from heaven above
her heart was that of finest gold
that could never fade away or get old
she cares about others more than herself
id give up my life for her if that could be helped
her voice seems to bring heaven down here
and all my troubles for a while disappear
my heart leaps for joy at the sign of her face
and if we become more than friends i should to love be with her till the end of the end

[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (09-27-2005 07:21 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-26 11:39 AM

Now this is so fresh and sweet, dear Sharkbean! I do hope that this Angel will stay by your side!

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-26 12:29 PM

sharksbean,
This is very sweet and wonderful. But you've got to remember one thing. Love comes a long way from liking someone. and if you just let life take you in wonderful places, anything is possible, keep your mind and heart open to yourself

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-09-26 12:56 PM

Fine devotional writing...taled off a little at the end..but a good attempt...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

4 posted 2005-09-26 01:23 PM

Dude, I can tell your in love. Act on your feelings. Don't hold back. This is a really good poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

5 posted 2005-09-26 01:24 PM

its enough for me that she knows how i feel

xFromtheHeartx
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since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

6 posted 2005-09-26 04:39 PM

AWSOME!!!!!! Well done bro!!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-09-26 06:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

8 posted 2005-09-26 07:26 PM

in the immortal words of elvis "thank you thank you very much

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-09-27 11:57 AM

I got a chuckle out of the reply you just wrote! ~ Because that is a line that have often written in response to some of the replies my poems have received!

Elvis still rules! ~ Only his throne is now out of this world! lol